Can you imagine:
breathing
loving
being
watching
bitching
thinking
smelling
hearing
feeling
expressing
fucking
screaming
whispering
smiling
sailing
amusing
bouncing
concentrating
communicating
cheering
fading
forcing
hugging
influencing
improving
killing
obeying
overflowing
owning
sharing
talking
trusting
while flying?
2 comments:
i REMEMBER THIS
from um the class!
and it's so good. the last two words make it just... splendidly splendid.
I feel like all ur work center on the last two lines which r like most intense and cool.
yay!! i like it!!
well gee, after reading the last time everything changes and i have to read the poem over again and experience it differently :P you certainly put up a more detailed picture of flying. now i can starting figuring out why everyone wants to fly...
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